Gosh Neera, you never cease to amaze me with your story telling, but this one hit a spot I had forgotten about for quite some time. That is a dream (often had), that I killed my father and buried him in the backyard, and I’m always terrified that one day someone is going to dig up that spot and find him. I know it is not true, but the dream is.
Thanks Sally. That dream of yours is horrible. I can imagine how would you feel afterwards. It gave me a story idea too. Thanks for sharing it. And thank you for restacking my story.
What a haunting story. It felt so real I expected the end to say he’d shown up after all.
This is an awful story, as well as an excellent story
It seemed so true, as though it was the telling of what really happened.
Thanks Carolyn.
So well written Neera. The reader is torn between horror and sympathy. Really really scary but great writing!
Thank you Minaz.
Gosh Neera, you never cease to amaze me with your story telling, but this one hit a spot I had forgotten about for quite some time. That is a dream (often had), that I killed my father and buried him in the backyard, and I’m always terrified that one day someone is going to dig up that spot and find him. I know it is not true, but the dream is.
Thanks Sally. That dream of yours is horrible. I can imagine how would you feel afterwards. It gave me a story idea too. Thanks for sharing it. And thank you for restacking my story.
I hope you are still having a wonderful time on your trip. 🤗
I am.
❤️❤️❤️
Thanks Vikki.
Wow I was very surprised by this post, in a good way !
Thank you Paula.
It would be another story if he had showed up.